Some parts were a little slow, and I had a hard time, depending on the moments, with Sal/Sally. Sometimes she was incredibly whiny and passive, voluntarily keeping a blind eye on a couple of things that were so blatantly obvious I wonder how anyone could fool oneself that way. Fortunately, she seemed to grow up and become more resourceful after a while, which was good.
Also, I really liked Tansy. Don't ask. I guess it's the "heroic sociopath" angle.