Yzabel

(I got an ARC through NetGalley, in exchange for an honest review.)

2-2.5 stars. In itself, it was a decent enough read, only I couldn't help but be reminded of many other dystopian YA stories... and after a while, those start to blend together. Among other things, it felt quite reminiscent of The Hunger Games and similar stories, except that the people involved weren't actively trying to kill each other, but were doing so in underhanded ways, notably being cowards and telling on others.

I was drawn towards this story because of its setting (post-war UK, or rather England/Wales—Scotland, well, nobody talks about Scotland, there must be something fishy with Scotland) and the promised mix of technology and mediaeval buildings/structures. However, such a mix is usually kind of hard to achieve, and I'm not sure it always worked here. The idea of a King totally fits the United Kingdom (much more than it would a US setting, for sure), and I think oppression resting on the ashes of a lasting civil war might be believable for a time. I can see people being so wary that they just want to close their eyes and ignore their current predicament, because at least they don't have to fight anymore.

On the other hand, I'm not sure that "oil ran out" could be used as the sole justification behind wars on the world level; I keep wondering what else should've been involved to make the situation as desperate. Also, the class society in the novel didn't really convince me: it remained too vague. What do Elites do, except being "the upper class", with the Members and Inter being, let's say, "upper-middle" and "lower-middle", and the Trogs being the "working class"? It seemed to me that no matter their status, those people kind of did the same jobs: an Elite guy and a Trog girl both end up working in the kitchens, for instance, and this system seemed to clash with how the Offerings were assigned to their jobs depending on skills (Silver ends up in a technology-related environment, because she was picked a tech-savvy during her Reckoning, but whether she was a Member or a Trog didn't seem to matter at this point). So in the end, I didn't really understand the point. I suppose it would've made more sense if I had seen society as a whole depicted here, with non-Offerings going about their work. Whenever I saw some, those were people who hadn't gone through the Reckoning (like Silver's mother, or the Head Kingsmen, who were already there before Reckonings first took place). They were outside the new class system, so to speak, and it didn't help me understand the latter.

Another problem was that I found a lot of things predictable. It might be just me, it might be due to similar stories I've read before, I don't know. It was obvious from the beginning that the King was completely mad, to the point of

The "let's try to escape" part was obvious as well, just like the romance part, and what actually happened to the families of those who didn't keep a low profile.

Silver Blackthorn: let's not dwell on that name; I still can't stand it. I had mixed feelings about her. In some ways, she came off as a coward, but at the same time, this attitude was also clever: don't get noticed, so that you live longer, and if you live longer, you have a chance of actually doing something. She limited her interactions with, and therefore her understanding of, other characters, who mostly remained bland and stereotypical. On the other hand, she also kept other people in mind: her family, Opie's, as well as the other Offerings. She's not planning a selfish escape just for herself and The Boy (OK, she does at first, and then she considers the bigger picture). I think what bothered me was that I would've expected her to do more tech-related stuff. Well, she does, but... in such a way that it's only seen afterwards.

And here's where I must touch upon something that really hindered the novel in my opinion: the first person point of view. There's a moment when a big twist unfurls, and the reader is led to believe something, while something else altogether is brewing. However, I think that the first person narrative is problematic in such cases, because once the twist is revealed, the reader immediately thinks: "Hey, the character knew about it, so how come s/he withheld the information, both from me and from him/herself?" This is what happened here. Before that point, the narrative was all right. After it, I couldn't get back into it anymore. For those who've already read the book: I'm talking, of course, about

In any case, what followed was a recap of who did what, and then only Silver's role was made more apparent... but by then, I felt cheated.

I would add to this a mild case of convenient chains of events, such as this or that character forgetting to lock a door on a regular basis. It didn't sit so well with me when it came to a place where paranoia was a rule.

Bonus point, though, for the romance, in that:

1) It doesn't dwell too much on a potential love triangle. This might come back in the next book, but for now, I'm going to ignore such a possibility, because I can and I want to.

2) The characters are attracted to each other while they do and think of other things. They mostly meet to find a way out, not merely to kiss and grope in the dark. The attraction comes later—and it doesn't take too much space, contrary to what I've seen happen in too many other stories.

I somewhat enjoyed this novel; I'd probably have enjoyed it more if it didn't feel and taste like many others in the same genre.